DiscoverEssential Guide to Writing a NovelEpisode 174 - How to ruin our story's first sentences.
Episode 174 - How to ruin our story's first sentences.

Episode 174 - How to ruin our story's first sentences.

Update: 2025-07-18
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A story's first sentence should make the reader ask, "What's next?"  They should propel the reader into the story.  Here's how to do it right and how to do it wrongly.  Also, three master writers show us how to describe a setting.

Here is a 20-episode master class on fiction writing—a start-to-finish course covering plot, characters, dialogue, scenes, sentence-level craft, and much more.  Each episode is focused and about 30 minutes.  The full class—all 20 episodes—is available now for a one-time price of forty-nine dollars.  If you want structured, concise guidance, click the Buy the Master Class link in the show notes to get started.

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Episode 174 - How to ruin our story's first sentences.

Episode 174 - How to ruin our story's first sentences.

James Thayer